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Friday, October 9, 2009

In Love ...


Long ago when I was young I used to write short stanza's using Idioms ... I have categorized them as In love and Out of Love Hope you will enjoy reading them and also welcome to make fun of me... I don't take pride in them. LOL


TAKE THE BACK SEAT
If you wish so my dear
You will have the ball at your feet
I am so truly in love with you
That I don’t mind having the back seat.


BOLT FROM BLUE
I made a mistake and lost you
But suddenly one fine day beside me, I had you
God bless me!! Now I realize
How one feels when strike by a bolt from blue


I WILL BE WAITING……
You can come when and as you wish
I will wait for you all life through
In case I run out of my life span
I assure you my bones will wait for you

NEEDLE IN HAY
I search for love in your heart
As I feel I will find it someday
But now whenever I look in a mirror
I see a fool searching for a needle in hay

KING OF MY HEART
Though you are unfaithful
My decision you cannot thwart
Here, from now on
I proclaim you the king of my heart

GREATEST LOVER ALIVE
I love you more than anyone can love anyone
More than a bee loves it honey filled hive
Now don’t think self praise is donkey praise
I am sure; I am the greatest lover alive

THE DRAW
I saw from the book of fate
With you to play was the draw
O.K I don’t mind playing with you
For I feel you are no man of straw

By: Farida Rizwan

10 comments:

  1. Oh, I just love this! I found it very moving and thoughtful, especially the line "I assure you my bones will wait for you".
    Thank you so much for writing this today.
    Big Hugs, XXXX

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  2. You are very good. I think I went through 'Needle in Hay' many many years ago... I have something for you at my blog, thank you for your comments.
    BM

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  3. Farila, I loved them all, especially "greatest lover alive" these are just too cool.
    BIG HUGS

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  4. I love that. It touched me ,Farilla

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  5. This are all amazing! My favorites are a tie between I'll be waiting and needle in hay.

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  6. Thank you so much people.. I still think you are being generous. I was in love long ago as a teen.. Sorry could not stay there. I feel it was like scaling Mt.Everest. Reach great heights, feel the emotion and then get down. LOL

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  7. NEEDLE IN HAY and THE DRAW are simply suberb. The Draw is so romantic, fool hardy and pratical...acceptance of reality yet so hopeful!

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  8. The Draw is great...acceptance of fate and realization of the positive in the chosen one!

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